Sometimes you just have to start over.
A new sheet of paper a new sketch. I went with the plumbline approach. Trying to be sure that eveything was in line! I started drawing her by trying to matching up the angle of the neck. Then I drew an oval for her head and her shoulder line.I also tried to check the negative space that her chin, neck, and shoulder form.
Making progress. A little Jawy still. Colors used DS Quinacridone Coral with a touch of cad yellow light for skin. Cerulean and burnt umber plus piemonite and cobalt for shadows. Hair is quinacridone sienna for highlights and ultramarine blue mixed with burnt umber for darks.
Thanks for looking!!